Ayrton Senna da Silva was born on March 21, 1960 in São Paulo. He was a Brazilian Formula 1 pilot, three times world champion.
He was also the runner-up in the controversial championship in 1993 and 1989.
He died in an accident in Imola during the San Marino Grand Prix in 1994.
His good performance in the previous categories led him to Formula 1 in the Grand Prix of Brazil in 1984. In his first season in the category, Senna showed great results, leading the small British team to reach results never achieved before.
After his die, Ayrton Senna kept for 12 years the record of pole positions.
His most exciting race happened in 1991 when he won Interlagos Grand Prix. His car was showing a lot of mechanic problems, but even then, he kept working to the racing top.
In December 2009 the British magazine Autosport published a story where they made an election to choose the best F1 pilot of all time. The magazine consulted 217 drivers who passed by category, and Ayrton Senna won that election.
Eddie
In December 2009 the British magazine Autosport published a story where they made an election to choose the best F1 pilot of all time. The magazine consulted 217 drivers who passed by category, and Ayrton Senna won that election.
I believe Airton Senna was one of the gratest F1 racer ever.
ResponderExcluirLet's check some things on your writing...
1. in March 21 - is it the right preposition for dates?
2. runner-up - it's a noun, so you need to put an article before
3. at Imola - is it the right preposition for places?
4. to small British - maybe you wanted to use 'the'
5. to achieve results never achieved - Can you think about another verb to avoid repeating achieve?
6. Ayrton Senna kept for 12 years after he died the record of pole positions - This sentence is very Portuguese like. Can you think of a better way to write it? Maybe you can use some punctuation.
7. exiting - check spelling
8. racing or race?
9. was shown - wrong verb tense
10. even then - even though?
11. vote - the election? the contest?
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Ale Café