She is not a famous person, but she had an amazing idea. Her name is Fernanda Galvão Cintra, and she has always been worried about the poor people, but she never want to give them money, she want to help them effectively. She also believes that witch person should do something to help the others. So she founded the MARP, an ONG in the city of Amparo
In the MARP you can find a school, so the kids can have access to an education, there they can have access to healty too, because in time from time a different kind of doctor go there to see the rural families, between those doctors have dentists, ophthalmologists, general practitioner and others. Add to that women can learn how to cook and sew.
Doing this, Fernanda didn’t have to change completely her live, but on sure she improve the life of lots of people.
Bel
What a great idea!
ResponderExcluirBel I checked your compositions...take a look at the underlined words...what's wrong about them?
she never want - What's seems to be the problem here?
she want - and in here?
witch - are you sure you're using the right word?
to the employee of the closes farms - this sentence is quite strange...i believe it's better to say...'this program offers a better quality of life to the employees of nearby farms'
In the MARP - AT MARP
An education - Is education countable?
in time form time - from time to time?
doctor GO there - 3rd person singular
Between - We use between to talk about 2 things..in this case you should use AMONG
Add to that women can learn how to cook and sew - there are some problems on this sentece: Add or and? that women or those women; or maybe that woman?
completely her live - her life completely.
Look for the mistakes and try to correct them..talk to me later at school.